Thursday, February 11, 2010

My Comments

I agree with Jillibird. I think you are a very happy person who is always smiling, but in this poem you go with two diffrent sides, the positive and negative. It's real becuase everyone has their ups and downs.



I really like your poem Jay. Because I know you I can see all these things and how they actually relate to you. I don't feel like it's just fancy writing, you thought about yourself and put it into a poem:)


very nice poem eva:) <3 Kaila

haha I wish my name was snow day today...well I wish my name was snowday everyday! <3 Kalzie

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