Kaila Franquist
2/11/10
4th hr
Full moon me
Everything2/11/10
4th hr
Full moon me
I am a soft purple lilac
Swaying happily
In the cool summer breeze.
I am free
Free as the spring
Wind picking up before a storm.
I am the cool,
Crisp creek
Running slowly but surely
With the ever
Changing autumn leaves
Landing in my path.
I am the harsh snow fall
In the middle of January
That shines and sparkles in the sunlight.
I am the sweet taste of
Raspberries with
The chance of being sour.
I am the real sound of
An acoustic guitar
And the glam up noise of an electric.
White, black and grey
I am.
Everything.
aww kay!
ReplyDeletei love this it is so good!
I like how you made the poem fit together and it was like a little story.
love youu
ally <3
Wow, I really like the ending! "I am everything" is a great way tos um up everything you said in the poem. Good job!
ReplyDeleteI really like the part about the guitars. Possibly because I am a big fan of music. But the whole poem flows together at the end with your last line. Very very good.
ReplyDeleteWow.
ReplyDeleteI really like this Kaila. I love how you used the seasons thoughout your poem.
The ending is great and powerful.
Good job!
<3 from EVA